I've actually got an interesting poem today! Not to belittle my other works, of course, but I'm just really excited about this one. I enrolled recently in a poetry class at Gemini Ink on revising poetry, but the first day we did a little bit of generating new poems, and I figured I'd share that poem with you, and then (if I end up editing it) I can post the edited version later and we can see how it's changed! Fun, huh?
This piece has no title because I hate titles and they are very difficult to come up with, but if it had one it would probably be Homecoming.
Homecoming
Andja Bjeletich
How many times
Have I seen this stone
Jutting through the river’s surface?
Is it smaller now?
Smoother,
Smoother,
After all these years
Braving the current?
If only I had noticed it before,
It’s topography and algae,
That I might mark it’s changes
In an unending passage of time
How long does it take
For an unrelenting river
To whittle this rocky away
To nothing but a thousand scattered grains
Like ash?
And how long must I stand here
Before I, too, am whittled to nothing
But dust and ash?
Will I recognize this river?
When the rock has gone?
When it is no longer filled with
Children splashing, terrorizing the innocent tadpoles?
Is it even the same river
Without my beautiful stone
That cleaves it in two?
And will it know me
When I am whittled by the
Relentless tide of time
Into nothing but dust
And ash?
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Let me know what you think! I'll show you the other one I'm working with tomorrow if I can remember, okay?
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